Sample Paper with Revisions
	to View the Clip!

Curious about the results of a conference? Check out the three items below. We've included a portion of a sample student paper, the types of comments a consultant might include, and a revised version of the paper. Although these comments mostly concern content, had the student made spelling or grammatical errors, we would have also identified and discussed those.

1. a sample student paper
2. the same paper, with comments marked, and
3. the same paper, revised to reflect the comments so expertly provided.

Want more information? See our list of consultant "wills and won'ts" at: Writing Workshop Page, or stop by at the Cooper Center!

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